Internet Marketing Journal - MarketingExperiments.com

FREE subscription to more than $20 million in marketing research

Enter your email below to receive the latest in marketing research and exclusives offers from MarketingExperiments.

create Lab ID
We value your privacy. View details on how to contact us.

You can also get our latest research delivered to you via our social media feeds below.

 

Follow us on Twitter Join our Optimization Group Visit the MarketingExperiments Blog
Listen to our MP3 Podcast Listen to our podcast on iTunes Watch videos on our YouTube Channel

Research Topics

Site Optimization

Email Optimization

Search Optimization

Marketing Optimization


Training


Search


"Your emails and website provide the common sense that we often leave at the door to the office."

David Jones
Senior Practice Leader
Kaiser Permanente




"I often change small things across many pages as MarketingExperiments gets me thinking about how to increase the straighforwardness of my pages for the visitor."

Amanda Schaner
Marketing Coordinator
Home Science Tools




"The live web clinics are very humbling. I think we're doing a pretty good job. But every time I attend, I realize we could do things much better for our clients. I consider MarketingExperiments my encyclopedia, and parrot the principles I learn every chance I get."

Troy O'Bryan
Co-Founder and Chief Response Officer
Response Capture, Inc

Home arrow Site Optimization arrow Powerful Value Propositions, Part II
Powerful Value Propositions, Part II
Friday, 21 November 2008
Synopsis

Topic: Powerful Value Propositions, Part II: Live Optimization

While our first clinic on value propositions was rooted in challenges and principles, most participants asked for even more hands-on guidance.

In our November 12, 2008 follow-up clinic, we built on the foundations of Part I and reviewed and optimized several examples submitted by clinic participants.

Those examples included strong and weak value propositions rated by our assessment matrix (and our live audience), copy and pages that had been revised following Part I, new landing page submissions, and the winner of our value proposition contest.

In addition to the print–friendly research brief below, you can:



Value Propositions – Critical to Conversion

The essence of a strong value proposition lies in its ability to answer this crucial question: “If I’m your ideal customer, why should I buy from you instead of a competitor?”

MarketingExperiments Conversion Sequence

Key Point: Clarity of Value Proposition (v) is the most important internal factor in the Conversion Sequence.

Your value proposition is critical to conversion because it’s your expression of the primary reason your ideal prospect should buy from you. In the MarketingExperiments Conversion Sequence, the clarity of the value proposition (denoted by “v”) is the most important element you can control. As a result, even small but significant changes to this area can yield major increases, as we covered in Part I.



The Value Proposition Assessment Matrix

Of course, identifying your ideal customer and understanding customer motivations are the enduring mysteries of marketing. In addition, marketers sometimes lose sight of customer perspective in the face of their own pressing goals. Using the value proposition evaluation matrix can help you assess how effectively your value proposition aligns with the needs of your ideal customers.

Value Proposition Assesment Matrix

This matrix allows you to rate your value propositions on a simple numerical scale using the criteria of desire and exclusivity. With that score, you can quickly evaluate how the value proposition stacks up against the two most significant components of customer motivation. This research brief also includes examples to illustrate how this matrix is applied.



Micro-Testing Your Value Proposition

When crafting a value proposition, using simple testing methods can further sharpen its effectiveness.

Even though value propositions are supposed to be simple, credible sentences, they can often devolve into ponderous, hard-to-read missives.  Micro-testing your value proposition challenges you to pare down excess and get to the core.

Using PPC ads is a straightforward way to evaluate your language and refine it to maximum capability.


How to Micro-test:

  • Create 3-5 variations of PPC ads using elements of your value proposition
  • Measure the clickthrough rate of each ad

The Result:

  • The ad with the highest clickthrough rate identifies the value proposition that’s most appealing to potential customers.

Example:  Value proposition micro-test for an ISO business:

ISO Stores

One benefit of micro-testing is that it allows you to craft variations of your value proposition that will be appropriate for different audiences.

But, regardless of your audience, there’s a consistent process to developing a value proposition.



Review: Three Steps Toward Strong Value Propositions

Step 1: Identify

Determine the primary reason a prospect should buy from you, with an emphasis on differentiation and desirability.

Step 2: Express

Refine your value proposition until you can express it in a single, instantly credible sentence.

Step 3: Test and Refine

Use micro-testing to evaluate and refine your value proposition.

Think of optimizing your value proposition as part of a continuously evolving cycle rather than a one-off process. This will give you an advantage in the constant flow of business changes such as new products and services, different offers and tests, and shifts in customers’ needs.



Five Examples of Value Propositions

To demonstrate the concept of strong and weak value propositions, we devoted much of the Part II clinic to reviewing real pages and copy that had been submitted by our audience.

With the following five examples, we assessed the value propositions using the aforementioned matrix, and also considered how well they answered the “Why should I buy from you?” question.

Example 1: Jewelry Days

Value propositions are often confused with taglines or slogans.  It’s easy to see why:  Eager to promote the virtues of a company or product, the copywriter may latch onto a catchy phrase designed to elicit a positive emotional response from customers. Unfortunately, such language rarely matches the key questions customers have when they first arrive at a site, such as “Where am I?” and “What can I do here?”

Jewelry Days’ homepage offers a clear example of a tagline.

Being able to say, “My Life is Beautiful” certainly may appeal to Jewelry Days’ ideal customer.  However, “My Life is Beautiful” is not a coherent response to the question, “If I’m your ideal prospect, why should I buy from you instead of a competitor?”  At first glance, Jewelry Days does not appear to have a value proposition.

But further research into their site uncovered valuable information on their “About Us” page.

From the "About Us" page:

Jewelry Days 'About Us' page

Product quality and being able to trust the seller are pressing issues for people shopping online – especially so for diamonds. If this site’s search functionality and customer assistance claims are accurate, this site has a distinct advantage it can promote, and a clear benefit in that the site helps buyers make informed decisions. While this paragraph could still be improved, it’s already establishing a connection with the ideal customer and doing so in a way that “My Life Is Beautiful” simply cannot match.

A tagline may make you feel an emotion but it doesn’t help you make a buying decision. A strong value proposition can engage a customer emotionally and intellectually because it answers the question of why a customer should buy from you.

Example 2: Stratasys FDM

Stratasys FDM

Here at MarketingExperiments, we don’t often purchase production-grade thermoplastics, so we can’t claim to be the ideal customer for these products. However, what makes Stratasys’ value proposition so effective for its intended audience is the combination of specific, credible claims and benefits – expressed in straightforward language, not puffery – and not trying to do too much with one block of copy.   

Compelling case studies, which use the same combination of specificity and credibility, also help Stratasys express its value proposition throughout its site. For instance, on the homepage, prospects can see themselves and their business challenges reflected in the people-driven case studies that also serve as powerful testimonials. The overall effect is one that achieves a high matrix score and answers the “why buy” question effectively.  

[Editor’s Note: This entry was also the winner of our value proposition contest. Congratulations to Stratasys and Brandyn Anderson for entering the competition. The prize: Free passes for our March 2009 Landing Page Optimization Workshop in Miami, Florida.]

Example 3: Teavana

Teavana

Teavana’s homepage represents a common middle ground: The sidebar on the page touches on factors that would differentiate the company and its products, yet the supporting language lacks the emphasis to drive those points home.

Restating the essential question of the value proposition in a heading is a smart move. It draws attention to information that will help shoppers make a buying decision. But the subheads are vague compared to phrases such as, “Every ingredient is hand-selected for health and taste” or “Bagged teas are typically lower quality … We hide nothing with tea bags.”

Many websites sell tea and use the same language found in the subheads – “only premium teas” and “fresh, delicious ingredients” – making the expressed value proposition fade into this crowded market rather than standing out. While the elements of a good value proposition are in the sidebar, and yield a good matrix score, much could be done to improve the expression, from the copy and its call to action, to its placement on the page relevant to the other design elements.

Example 4: Shipping Solutions
Shipping Solutions

This is another almost-but-not-quite-there example. Shipping Solutions’ strong quantitative expression gets lost in grammatical confusion and poor copy congruence.

In the submitted value proposition, Shipping Solutions presumably intends to promise an up to 80% reduction in time to complete export documents while helping to meet your compliance responsibilities in full. We’re not the target customer for these services, but we wouldn’t expect an 80% compliance rate to be the best selling point.

Just by altering this sentence to clarify what the “up to 80%” does, and doesn’t, apply to would be a step in the right direction. If that reduction is the industry leader for this market, even better.

The “About Us” page mentions that this is the #1 selling software of its kind in the U.S. If that claim that can be fully substantiated with credibility indicators, it deserves to be more prominent and supported with awards or reviews. Moreover, the submitted statement is not closely tied to the language presented on the page, which emphasizes “easy” several times but doesn’t specifically underscore the huge time savings. An alternative would be to state a clarified value proposition immediately and directly while supporting the claim to exclusivity through a comparison chart.

Example 5: 1-800-Bakery
1-800-Bakery

1-800-Bakery expresses its current value proposition by noting the years of experience and on-time delivery. But are those terms really the most effective when you’re looking for a bakery online?

On-time delivery is certainly important, but many competitors can deliver that. Likewise, claiming 25 years of experience is good, but numerous bakeries can match or exceed that, and may not even need to (like a celebrity chef’s brand-new bakery or a younger business with a wildly popular recipe). All in all, the submitted value proposition does little to distinguish the site from a wide range of competitors.

Fortunately, much like Jewelry Days and Teavana, the components of a more unique value proposition can be found around the site. At the bottom of the home page, a personal note from Chef Steve uses compelling points such as: “more than 800 fresh bakery treats from 53 bakeries across the United States” and that every order “goes straight from the local baker’s oven to the doorstep where you ordered it.” Another page on the site states: “We use tested and known bakeries to form an online family of bakeries who have committed to a proprietary code of excellence.”

This type of precise, quantitative information about variety and the network of local bakeries, plus the quality standards and freshness, would likely answer shoppers’ questions of why 1-800-Bakery is their best choice.

The “Buried Treasure” Effect

Four of the five examples above illustrate the “buried treasure” effect: Your strongest value proposition is often hidden in your copy or on your site.

Between desire and exclusivity, exclusivity is almost always the more difficult quality to achieve. That’s why marketers must uncover what truly differentiates their offer, or risk squandering key advantages.

To pinpoint qualities that differentiate your organization, review pages beyond homepage – About Us, FAQ, Help, even Careers – for hidden gems that deserve more prominence.



Live Optimization: Review of Revisions by Part I Participants

We began our live optimization session by reviewing value propositions that had been submitted by clinic participants for Part I, and were then revised (either the copy or landing page) before Part II.

For more feedback on the effectiveness of the textual revisions, we also polled our clinic audience for their reaction to the changes.

Copy Revision 1: JMR Consulting
JMR homepage

First Value Proposition Submitted:

We do marketing and public relations that works for small software companies.

Revised Value Proposition:

Get your own team of software marketing experts to help you grow your small software business starting at just $2000/month.

The Audience Poll:
Audience Poll

Most of the audience rated the revision as an improvement but the overall response was lukewarm. Jimmy Ellis and Aaron Rosenthal offered suggestions for further development.

Jimmy Ellis: I agree that it is somewhat improved but I’d like to suggest that you prove that you actually do have software marketing experts. Do they have certifications? Have they won awards? Nowadays, everyone’s an expert so it’s good to offer any proof you can.

Aaron Rosenthal: If you’re going to present a price very early on in the offer, make sure it’s the lowest price or that you’re really offering tremendous value for that price. Offering a price at the outset primarily encourages people to go to your competitors and comparison shop.

Jimmy Ellis: One good way to qualify your price would be to clarify how many people are on the team you offer. If you get 15 people for $2,000, that’s a much better deal than if you get two.

Copy Revision 2: Schott’s Chocolate

Schott's Chocolate

First Value Proposition Submitted:

Where you can create unique memorable 100% edible chocolate gifts, promotions, and party favors.

Revised Value Proposition:

Our innovative chocolate printing technology and our creative graphic design enable us to help you create unique chocolate party favors and promotional items that make your life celebration or corporate event stand out and be remembered.

The Audience Poll:
Audience Poll

Both the audience and our optimization team reacted negatively to the extended length of the revised version.

Jimmy Ellis:  I think the brevity of the original makes it more valuable. Another thing that got lost in the revision was any discussion of the chocolate. It’s important to me to know that it’s edible but even more important is the quality of the chocolate. I don’t care about the product if it comes on poor quality chocolate.  Also, in this case I think you ought to use images to let the product speak for itself and move them higher on the page. It’s when I see the picture of the little boy actually printed on the lollipop that I think, “Hey, that’s pretty cool.”

Aaron Rosenthal: What I think you have here is a very unique niche product so I’d do some research to see how you can emphasize that differentiation—are you the only one, or the only one in your area?  The other thing I’d suggest is that you’ve got too much going on in your page.  You’ve got a wavy banner, unconventional navigation on your left, lots of headers and titles, and a logo and more navigation on the right.  I would look at this page and think, “What am I really trying to accomplish here?” and eliminate everything else.



From Changing Text to Changing Pages: Deeper Revisions

Some of our Part I attendees submitted changes not only to their value proposition copy, but to other elements of their pages. Because these changes were more extensive, we skipped the polling to focus on suggestions for optimizing the value proposition throughout the entire page.

Page Revision 1: Dur-A-Flex

Dur-A-Flex

Jimmy Ellis: I’d like to focus first on the page on the left and all the distractions there. The big graphic at the top doesn’t state or support the value proposition—in fact, by looking at it, it’s confusing to see exactly what this company does. Then, when they do state the value proposition, you miss it because your eye is drawn to the long form underneath. Finally, the three images on the right are too powerful and when I say “powerful,” I mean that they distract your eye from the page’s real objective.

Now the page on the right has a real headline that’s easy to see. Even more important, there’s a headline and a sub-headline. This page is a great example of the “vertical flow” we’re always talking about. Now the “free” graphic is emphasized so I know that I can get something free whether or not the form is actually shorter. It looks shorter and that’s always a good thing.

Aaron Rosenthal: The thing I’d really like to draw attention to is the fact that we’re looking at almost identical headlines but you simply couldn’t see the one on the left. This page has done a terrific job of simplifying the eyepath.

Page Revision 2: On Conference

On Conference

Aaron Rosenthal: As I’m looking for changes one thing I’m noticing is that while there are changes in headline and button style, the information has not changed all that much. One change that’s mentioned is the idea that through On Conference you can get better voice quality than direct dial but there’s a more effective statement down below. If they really can get started in three minutes, then they need a button or a headline that will help them get started. Notice that by moving the call to action button to the upper right, you’ve taken it out of the customer’s eyepath. So when they get to the bottom of the page, they’re confused about how they’ll take action.

Jimmy Ellis: Voice quality is pretty hard to prove. But if your system is really easy to use, support that with quantitative copy. I have to say I don’t approve of the change to the headline: the white print on green is hard to read, and even Aaron was having a hard time reading it. I definitely think that the image on the right is better but I’d like to see if there’s some way to combine it with the image of the map.

Aaron Rosenthal: One danger in your current graphic is that the woman is holding a landline phone and that doesn’t immediately suggest conference calling. Also, if the goal of this page is lead-gen, consider that you need to start collecting that information on the first page.

Overall, the live optimizations of the revised pages focused on streamlining and simplicity. Participants were encouraged to optimize their value propositions through:

  • quantitative evidence
  • vertical flow
  • relevant graphics
  • focused calls to action

The live optimization continued with an exploration of three newly submitted landing pages.



Live Optimization Continued:

Example 1: Albert-at-Bay
Albert at Bay

Aaron Rosenthal: Your value proposition is great—it’s really starting to get somewhere but you really don’t communicate it until the second paragraph. However, I find both your graphics and your tagline confusing. Is “Really, really BIG” serious or is it a joke? And what is that elephant doing in my hotel room?

Jimmy Ellis: I agree completely. I’d much rather see information like “our suites are 40% larger” or “27% less cost” or a chart that compares square footage. While I really like your second paragraph, it would be great to break that paragraph into bullets and put thumbnails into each architectural feature mentioned in your copy so that people can really see what you’re talking about.

Example 2: U-Store-It
U-Store-It

Jimmy Ellis: The first thing I see about this page is that there is no value proposition unless it’s that you’ve got over 400 locations nationwide. But that’s not a value proposition because there are literally storage facilities everywhere. This page needs a lot of help. It’s got attractive images but it doesn’t explain much to customers or help them get started unless they type in their zip code. Fortunately, the name of the company does a good job of communicating its purpose.

Some of my recommendations include using an image that doesn’t have a hard-to-read testimonial. And, unless price is your value proposition, you’ve got to do something to get your prospects interested in using your service before they start looking up locations and rates. In my opinion, this site really needs to start from scratch.

Aaron Rosenthal: One important thing to notice here is that you have all these boxes, or ad tiles, trying to communicate all these different messages. But what happens is that these tiles end up competing with one another. On one page, you’ve got location rates; pay your bills; first month free. It’s information overload and you’re not guiding anyone.

I don’t mean to offend anyone but you’re really doing a poor job of getting into your customer’s thought process. But, please remember, this gives you that much more opportunity to test, get improvements, and ultimately increase your revenue.

Example 3: Montessori in Redlands
Motessori in Redlands

Jimmy Ellis: The main problem with your value proposition is that there’s no proof, no credibility in that statement. If I’m a parent looking for a school for my kid, I need you to show me proof that a Montessori education will help my child excel. If there are studies showing that Montessori kids do better in college, need less remedial education, or excel in relationships, this is the time to reference those studies. And as a fundamental rule, don’t say “Welcome” on your homepage, say “why” a prospect can benefit from being here.

Aaron Rosenthal: Right now you’re using a print advertisement at your web page. You need to focus more on the worth of what you’re trying to communicate to a customer than using pretty graphics and background images to try and communicate that message.



Value Proposition: Qualitative vs. Quantitative

Many of the examples reviewed shared a common theme: the expression of their value proposition was not specific enough.

One problem is that in efforts to keep value propositions brief, vague terms replace the truly unique or valuable aspects of a company, its products or offers. Because marketers are intimately familiar with their products or services, those generic descriptions seem perfectly clear. Or, certain characteristics of the company, product or service that are most valuable to customers are overlooked.

An example from Dr. Flint McGlaughlin’s paper, “Transparent Marketing,” details how to keep asking “So what?” to transform a value proposition from general and unremarkable to unique and intriguing. In the paper, Dr. McLaughlin used this approach to revise the value proposition for a hypothetical company called Mediwidgets.

Qualitative vs. Quantitative Value Propositions

Replacing vague modifiers with specific, quantitative facts makes the value proposition shorter, easier to grasp, and more attractive to potential customers.

To avoid falling into the trap of qualitative language, beware of overused words such as:

  • best
  • leading
  • unique
  • finest
  • highest quality
  • only
  • cutting-edge
  • cost-effective
  • superior
  • innovative
  • solutions

If you find similar buzzwords and hollow superlatives in your copy, revise it with an emphasis on specific, quantifiable details. And if coming up with those specifics seems impossible, let your customers do the bragging for you with genuine testimonials and third-party credibility indicators (awards, reviews, seals).

After those steps, if you’re still struggling to create a powerful value proposition, it’s time to take a hard look at the product, service, offer or even your business model; a more intensive fix may be in order.


Watch the next Web Clinic in real-time

Enter your email below for invites to our Web Clinics featuring:

  • First access* invites to Web clinics
  • Latest discoveries in online testing and optimization research
  • Interactive Q&A with the MECLABS research team
  • Live analysis of audience-submitted landing pages and wireframes

You will also receive updates on the latest in marketing research and exclusives offers from MarketingExperiments.




Subscribe for FREE

* Seating is limited to 1,000 attendees and fills quickly

We value your privacy. View details on how to contact us.



Summary
Powerful Value Propositions
  • Optimizing your value proposition is a cyclical process that involves identifying, expressing, and testing/refining.
  • Look for the “buried treasure” on your site: Find hidden elements in your copy that will strengthen your value proposition.
  • Use tools like the assessment matrix and PPC micro-tests to evaluate your offers and re-craft them as needed.
  • Refine your value proposition until you can articulate it in a single, instantly credible sentence.
  • Focus on quantitative expression over qualitative.

Notes

Related Marketing Experiments’ Reports:

Literature Review

As part of our research, we have prepared a review of the best Internet resources on this topic. Rating System
These sites were rated for usefulness and clarity, but alas, the rating is purely subjective.
* = Decent | ** = Good | *** = Excellent | **** = Indispensable

About This Brief

 

Credits:

Managing Editor — Hunter Boyle

Writer — Anna Jacobson

Contributor(s) — Flint McGlaughlin
Jimmy Ellis
Aaron Rosenthal
Bob Kemper

Production — Mel Harris
Austin McCraw
Cliff Rainer
Amanda Mehlhoff

::Top Of Page::